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This is pretty good. There are a lot of smooth movements within this flash and a lot of potential

errrr...... I think Daniel might be homosexual. As far as animation goes its not to shaby, there are a lot of loops but I don't so much mind the microsoft sam voice over. Not a bad animation but not ground breaking either, I'm sure a lot of people will now forward this to a Daniel that they know and I for one am about to start this

You show great promise especially as I think this is your first animation? I re watched your other video and loved it. And like I say If you can draw anything then you can animate anything

blackember responds:

Yeah, first animation! Thanks so much man, you are awesome. I hope to improve greatly as well! Hopefully I'll be somewhat close the top in the near future. Keep your eyes open! ;D

Nice Idea you have here and the perfect loop, You should make him change every now and again when he reforms, that would be pretty cool other then that not bad at all, keep it up and continue improving

I think your style could use a lot of work, I'm talking about the first scene thats mostly hand drawn, though The part with the bridge seemed really well designed though. Not to sure what its about. If you spend more time on this it could be so much better As you have said in a previous comment about neglecting this project. There is potential here, especially with that bridge scene

Loved the fluency of this animation. But is it me or did that lizard not have any whites in its eyes. They looked transparent as if I could see the background through them, But that might just be me. Really don't have much else to say here apart from good job

haha, thats more of a tape'Raptor' then a tapeworm, also noticed the nurse with the tight top on there, you sneaky thing you. I like these concepts they show a lot of promise but I agree with MistyEntertainment below me. Just keep practicing and you'll get there

I don't think its fair for me to criticize your work as you are just beginning but what counts is that your doing it. look up tutorials and learn how to add a start menu and maybe a little bit about actionscript. Other then that I wish you luck and I hope to see your animations

I commend you for the frame by frame animation and the good use of bluring motion for movements. I would have loved to have seen some good fighting choreography in there though. In all a good flash you've got yourself here. Loved the blue veins of the monster

Really well animated a well worthy 5

I am a creator of sorts, sometimes i like to draw things and make them move

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